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: time machine :

Published: Jun 28, 2013

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_{Beaut older?! Do you prefer this or his younger current self?
I thought it'd be interesting to color the roses white rather than the typical red/black roses that surround vampires.

(Any RPs I haven't replied to please remind me ahh I'm not ignoring anyone on purpose I just forgot Q A Q)
On a side note, haven't drawn digitally for what seems forever ah -! How nostalgic, I really hope to improve my art! Critiques on my stuff I'd really appreciate <3
I tried a few new things with this, iunno if you can tell. ///}

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xxAi-Himexx

Jun 29, 2013

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I really like this drawing. I love the sketchy stile of line art and the roses as accents around the bust are pretty. The drops of blood are also a nice touch and the pink background looks pretty against his face an eyes. I only think that the colors look a bit too saturated, and probably could have been a bit bolder. Just slightly, because the pink is so light. Especially with the color scheme of reds, blues, yellows and then the blacks and whites. Just to help the attention stay on the character a bit more as opposed to him not necessarily catching the eye. It also looks like you tried to give him a slightly white outline? That should be a bit more pronounced with this background too because it's so light. I think that would have been a nice touch if it was easier to see. Other than that, I think this picture is adorable and you did a nice job on it~